"Saying a textbook will meet #ccss is like saying holding a Weight Watchers box
will make you thin."
will make you thin."
quoted from a tweet found on Christopher Lehman's website
In almost a eulogizing effort last night I reread some of Kate's blogs. I still have a couple I haven't read so what I am about to say may already have been expressed. As I was reading last night, two big ideas bounced around in my brain. First, through our efforts with close reading we now have the power, i.e. skills and knowledge, to take our students' writing to higher levels than we've seen. Ever...or at least in my lifetime. Perhaps, from teaching and coaching our students to read closely and helping them transfer that same depth and detail to their writing they will go where no student has gone before.
Second, in Kate's post yesterday she linked close reading to close living. In other words, wake up and truly notice the details in life. We are oblivious to the details and are missing opportunities to create special moments from those visible yet invisible details. Perhaps all the multitasking, the hurrying to get more done, faster, quicker, perhaps the evolving loss of a sixth sense, that of being aware of your surroundings for basic survival, has resulted in a deadened ability to observe what is right before our eyes. We have lost the ability to look closely at life. Have you noticed people don't even look--and we're not even talking both ways--when they cross the street?
The glass I am drinking from is more than half full when it comes to close reading. I fret about the publishers that are coming out with programs to teach close reading. Their promises for easy to deliver lessons that produce successful learning outcomes are as compelling as losing weight easily and successfully and without giving up the dessert food group. Where's the disconnect? Back in my former Reading Recovery days, three lifetimes ago, we were adamant, outspoken, and clear that programs do not teach students. Teachers teach students. We can't let this opportunity pass. We can't mess it up this time with mass marketed materials coming from publishers that don't know our kids. Instead, we must put on our big-boy or big-girl pants and use our close reading lessons as opportunities to explore the possibilities of how deeply we can take our students whether it be in reading, writing, or in their ability to look at life with fresh, open and awakened eyes. Our first steps are the hardest.
Meet Kelly Villalobos, 2nd Grade Teacher Turlock, CA

How much prep time?
The actual prep time for the lesson
wasn’t all that long. The biggest
challenge I faced was really understanding what close reading is and trying to
figure out how I would implement it in the classroom with my second
graders. I didn’t know where to
start. Finding the text and CCSS based
questions and activities were pretty easy.
http://www.teacherspayteachers.com/Product/2nd-Grade-Informational-Text-Passages-Close-Reading-CCSS-Assessment-Homework-884414

One more thing…I referenced my WONDERFUL standards sheets from Tulare County Office of Education. http://www.tcoe.org/ERS/CCSS/ELA/Templates_02.pdf (INCREDIBLY AWESOME) I focused on RI 2.1 and RI 2.2 to guide my lesson and my content and language objectives for the lesson.
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- Pass out text, we numbered the paragraphs, and I read to students the first time.
- Second reading was a shared reading with students. Pass out annotation marks sheet and discussed what each meant.
- Third read: The first paragraph I read and modeled making annotations. I “thought out loud” to show them what my thought process was as I made the annotations. The second paragraph they read with me and helped me with annotations. The third paragraph I asked them to do it alone. This was a mistake. They needed more guidance. I roped them back in and we did the 3rd and 4th paragraph together. Somewhere in the third paragraph, a low reader (EL) timidly raised his hand and asked "What does government mean?" That was the turning point in the lesson. I was amazed that he spoke up. I was so gratefu
- Discuss what a president is. What are the jobs of a president? Who is our current president?( the kids couldn’t answer this).
- l too. He prompted the others to come out of their shells and discuss and ask questions. It was great. I had to d
- Introduce and define close reading as well as the terms expository, annotations, and text.
- I gave some side bar definitions of Congress and the SupremeCourt but the kids got it.
- I concluded that portion of the lesson with the students using post its to write two facts that they learned about the president. No one had a hard time coming up with ideas.
What worked with the lesson?

What would you change?

How was student engagement?
Super! Second graders are naturally
squirrelly. To make it even more
challenging, I have 9 students reading below grade level. Four of those are significantly below grade
level, reading at a level 2. That being
said, all students were engaged. The
fact that I read the text to them helped. The annotation sheet was also a gem.
It was an easy to use tool that kept the students busy but also brought
meaning to the text.
There was so much information I wanted to share this week. Somehow it all seemed insignificant compared to celebrating a teacher's first attempt at close reading. As teachers we are always trying something new. It keeps us fresh and moving toward becoming better at our craft. I strongly encourage you, beg you, to click and listen to the poem on close reading: When the Key Clicks by Kevin Hodgson. It is beautiful and would serve as the most poignant conclusion to any PD on close reading.
Until next time keep your eyes wide open, be sure and look both ways, and look closely at the world. Happy Saturday.
Until next time keep your eyes wide open, be sure and look both ways, and look closely at the world. Happy Saturday.
This was extremely helpful to me! My second graders and I thank you for putting this post together!
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